Dark Supergirl Prelim 04

Good evening champions. Not much of a leap forward, but the small things matter. I've managed to flesh out the hands holding the smartphone taping this devastation, but I have to make some adjustments to the foreshortening of the device itself. I've also defined the shattered front window of the comic book store by darkening everything inside until the viewer's eye reaches the seam of that wall. I'll book an earlier day to get back to this this week but I hope that my client is satisfied with the progress so far. My concern as usual is the line thickness. The art has to breathe or it'll look like my high school self drew this. More as it develops.