Pumpkinhead

Started last night, I liked it at first but I am not sure how I feel about it now, something isnt right and i think it mainly has to do with the face. Any thoughts/criticisms?

Tried to keep this one in pencil, I seem to end up using marker but I refrained from that but I did use small dabs of white paint for the highlighting which I need serious work on. Anything anyone would like to see drawn? I know what people think looks cool is subjective but is there any one universal thing that everyone would agree is badass? I'd like to maybe tackle that.