The ruddy face is a very nice effect and it looks like it has some resemblence to Bryce Dallas Howard who played Gwen.
I see the resemblance, now that you mention it! I also liked her complexion - very nice effect that I thought was well executed with the colored pencils.
Almost made me cringe when I read that your first Art Adams comic was X-Factor #42. Felt really old all of a sudden. Anyway, nice piece for your first Adams. Congratulations!