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May 2004: The Authority :: Apollo vs. Superman

Artwork Details

Title:	Apollo vs. Superman
Posted By:	Kevin Kendall
Artist:	None Specified
Media Type:	Pencil
Art Type:	Sketchbook
For Sale Status:	NFS
Views:	4193
Comments:	3
Added to Site:	5/1/2004

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By Kevin Kendall

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	Kevin Kendall wrote: [ Quote & Reply ] I was hoping to get a little feedback...I'm interested in taking it to the next level with my art. Good or bad comments welcome. -Kevin Posted on 5/3/2004

V Shane wrote: [ Quote & Reply ]
Alright since you want one :) Technically/artistically its good. All the anatomy is certainly in the right place. The action is something to be desired, as to me Apollo seems to be reclining on a couch and Superman is really P.O.'ed he lost the remote. All kidding aside, the composition doesn't really grab me. However, if you rotate the image about 20 degrees more CW, it would read a little more active. If you look at the shape both of them make, its an "X", and thats a pretty stable/symetrical shape. One of the figures should have more foreshortening than the other to give a more dynamic feel. IHMO. Shane
Posted on 5/5/2004

	Kevin Kendall wrote: [ Quote & Reply ] Lots of good points...the sketch was really to represent the two characters together, and I didn't really concentrate on the composition...thanks for the comment. Posted on 5/5/2004

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