-2020 Additional- Blueline inks on this page now finished by original inker Dan Green. Pencils retained separately.
PAGE SIX
4 panels
1 Back inside Rann's mind the K'Lar are showing the Cmdr. a few more choice pictures to get everyone up to speed a la MONTAGE: the Space-squids blasting at the shells of Homeworld; K'Lar warriors and Warrior-Cannons decimating Royal Zone; the K'Lar fighting the 'Nauts in the Royal City. Also, show us a little pic of Fireflyte's pixie effect, as if she's trying to materialize inside Rann's mind--which she is! Her song is a riddle, urging Rann on and eluding to the reader how to defeat the uni-minded, organics-devowering K'Lar! Fireflyte is telling Rann to merge w/ her and she'll force the K'Lar from his mind...merge w/ the Enigma Force...
2 Move back to the corporeal Rann. Still on his knees, struggling against the leach, his head is thrown back, freely emitting the Enigma Force. Rann's screaming in agony again, nose bleed in full-force. The EF is shooting out of his eyes and mouth, forming an unmistakable figure...FIREFLYTE! Also, the EF has enveloped the Brain-Leach, seemingly giving it a little electric charge to loosen its tentacles. Firetlyte's still materializing, pixilated.
3 Now show Rann (still in full-on EF channeling mode) flinging the Brain-Leach away from him. Fireflyte is above him like an Arthurian guardian fairy. Don't forget Rann's bloody nose.
4 Show me a FULL-SHOT of Fireflyte flittering above the fray to give her a good introductory panel. She's as serene as the Virgin Mary as she completes her manifestation, hands outstretched meditatively, eyes closed. Angelic. A shot of just Fireflyte cut & pasted onto the page is what I'm shooting for.
