-2020 Additional- Blueline inks now finished by multiple artists. Andrew's personal favorite posted above. Pencils retained separately.
PAGE TWENTY-THREE
3 panels
1 Largest panel of page. MEDIUM-SHOT. Now show me Huntarr finishing off his brain-bug in a more hands-on fashion, morphing his hands into something akin to Medieval battle axes. The brain-bug is curling up like a slug that's just been doused in salt. Mari has joined in w/ Huntarr, ramming her serrated spike hilt deep into yet another brain-bug. In the mid-ground, Rann and Fireflyte are holding the suddenly berserk K'Lar warriors back w/ EF blasts, while Bug does a Holy->tik<-Shrew-this-is-no-place-for-an-Insectivorid-to-be-double-take. He looks startled, in short.
The living walls of the chamber are spasming, quivering. Think of your stomach after "taco night" at the bar that night you mixed Tequila, beer and salsa--and too much of it! The walls of the chamber look like your stomach felt (well, mine anyways).
2 CLOSE IN to a MCU of Bug. Smallest panel of page. He's telling everyone to look at the walls of the chamber. Even the "floor" is "grumbling" a little. Rann's in the near mid-ground--preoccupied w/ a K'Lar warrior he's blasting w/ an EF blast.
3 CUT TO the space troopers inside the giant-squid. MEDIUM-SHOT. They're knee deep in K'Lar as well, blasting away. An explosive device is detonating in the BG, and in the FG a team of troopers are guarding a trooper who's setting his own charge. This is one of the sources of the giant squid's tummy ache. Incorporate into this panel something similar in design to the VIG of Rann that you did on page 11, issue #1, Cary. But not as big.
