-2020 Additional- Blueline inks now finished by multiple artists. Andrew's personal favorite posted above. Pencils retained separately.
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4 panels
1 Now show me a cluster of giant space-squids, CROPPED-OFF (panel right). The assault transports are rocketing towards the squids (panel left), w/ no intent of stopping until they pierce the fleshy hull of their enemy.
2 CLOSE IN: The assault transports are closer. A swarm of mini-squids is being cut off by Homeworld Interceptors (one Interceptor is playing kamikaze, sacrificing itself to a caustic blast so that the transports can get through). One of the giant squids is "puffing up," readying its own blast to rid themselves of this threat.
3 SWITCH ANGLES and show me two transports striking the fleshy hull of the same giant space-squid. The fleshy mass around their "entry point" is spasming and "splashing" like pool of meaty liquid.
4 CUT TO the INT of the giant-squid to show me the transport as it spills out its SPACE TROOPERS, Thorium rifles blasting away at the living walls of the ship and at any misc. K'Lar creatures scurrying about. A few K'Lar warriors are racing to defend the hive, some running on their hind legs, others on all four like hounds.
The Space Troopers are carrying an assortment of weapons. Some have the rifles that Cary was drawing in #1, some have larger, shoulder-mounted Thorium cannons. Some soldiers have explosives strapped to their backs, or are readying to set the devices up for detonation. They're ready to rock.